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Question: Does my poem sound sort of lame or is it good enough!?
You Can Look But You Can't Have It
When you sit next to me,
my heart starts beating faster
and i inch closer to you
ever so slightly!.
When you compliment me,
i look into your eyes
and i see that you mean
everything you say!.
I want to take your hand and
tell you how much i appreciate
you being my best friend
through all these years!.
Deep down inside, though,
i want us to be more than friends!.
but that can't happen!.
not now!.!.!.!.
I can't whisper into your ear
and say "I love you"!.
I can't kiss you softly
because i have someone else
For now, i'll be happy with
you being my friend!.
But never forget that
i'll always love youWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
sounds good you should publish it!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow!.!.!.really good ^^
it kinda makes me think about this girl i know!. as if it was her saying this!.!.!.!.
it kinda puts me in a bummed state of mind reading this cause she's with some one else, and it makes me realize that much more that nothing more than being friends can happen between us!.!.!.!.*sigh* Y!.Y!.!.!.!.oh well, id rather be a friend that not have her in my life at all ^^!.
anyways, love the poem ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is not lame it's a good good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think its good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
pretty good i liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its not lame
i actually like this one its goodWww@QuestionHome@Com