New visual Poem: please be honest, what is your opinion of this poem?

Question: New visual Poem: please be honest, what is your opinion of this poem!?

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That is an excellent poem!. It completely reflects the person who wrote it!. You are extremely talented!. It sounds very professional!. It doesn't rhyme, however it sounds very poetic (not all poems rhyme!)
Keep continuing your beautiful, excellent work!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was okay- i know what you were trying to achieve but with the monotone robotic voice, the very soft song your poem immediately felt corny

what you could have done was had a narrator who genuinely felt the poem and undesrtood it, i like that you chose the song with a title called 'promise' but the song does nothing to make the production feel good- its actually adds to the tackiness

maybe lose the rhyming because it makes the magnitude of solemness of the poem somewhat diminshed - it doesnt sound as good when the narrator rhymes in a silly tone every 2 seconds

it was overall a very good effort, and i've read some of your work before and i absolutely loved it- keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com

My dear young lady,

This is my first reading of your work made more interesting by the way in which it was presented!. I thought the poem itself was most pleasing!. Its message instructive and to the point!.

Just one little slip up in the rhyming near the beginning but that I overlooked!. I must admit that at times I was distracted by your accent wondering where you came from; Pommy land that was obvious, like myself!.

My respects to you poet!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

i liked the poem, but i didn't like the narrator's voice!. it just didn't fit right for me!.

Blessed BeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very, very, good!. I enjoyed itWww@QuestionHome@Com