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Question: Ok my friend bob dosent have a computer and he wants to know if the poem i helped him wright is good!!?
remember all remember the but most of all remember me
remember that clown that came around and turned your world upside down


i helped him find wods that rymed
lol
plz rate on a scale of 0 - 10
like 4!.6 or 1!.0
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I rate it a 7

Since I know you're an honest person, tell bob to keep up the good work! It's scary, I might understand what "the but" means!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

its short (a certain style!?) and everything but the beginning is good!. the beginning should make me want to read more!.!.!.not reread it because i don't understand it!.!.!.!. remember al remember the but!?!? i don't understand!.
I give it a 6!.7
and its okay to say this is your poem ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

remember all remember the but most of all remember me

what does this mean!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

kind of short but goodi would rate it about 7!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

8!.5 i know its yoursWww@QuestionHome@Com