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Question: Is m poem ok!?!?!?
Enough Is Enough

I've tried so many times to
help you change your ways!.
Yet you always take advantage
of and never thank me!.

I've spent so many nights
crying myself to sleep
over you even though
you don't care at all!.

I'm sick and tired of
having feelings for you!.
I've had enough of your
evil ways!.

I'm leaving you behind
and never looking back!.
I'm moving on without you
whether you like it or not


i wrote this while i was crying cause i'm tired of the way my ex bf treats me!. sorry if it sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Pour out your heart and soul to me, luvie!. You are in a time of need which knows no bounds!. Keep on hating him, and keep on crying!. Because in the end, you will come out of your room and live your life right!. You will come out of your cocoon and emerge into a gorgeous butterfly!. Soon, all will be well!. Just keep on crying and you will see the way!.

P!.S!. I am always there for you!. I will always catch you if you fall!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it! the wording could use a bit more work but otherwise it was heartfelt and i could really feel the emotion you put into this!.!.!. lets just say i probably couldnt have done better than that lol it was really nice!. Just remember that you cant let him push you around!. youve got to stand up for yourself!. A boyfriend should treat his girlfriend with respect and should take care of her not push her around!. if i was you i would not go out with him anymore and look for someone that would treat me fairly!. oh but i cant lol cause im a guy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i TOTALLY luvv it!!! its real, emotional, and you can tell that you really are serious about stopping how he is!.
plus it could even take on more than one meaning, an addict's gf who is trying to get him to stop for example
great job! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem is great!.

You have the insight and strength to write like this, so you have the insight and strength to move on from this relationship, and be all the stronger for it!.

YOU deserve better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is really good
i lyked it u can relate
:)
its good with the song
everything back but you-avril lavgine
kindaWww@QuestionHome@Com

ITZ GREAT!! just remember!.!.!. if he treats you so badly you should talk to an adult or something!.!.!.!. also try ignoring him!.!.!.
or you can confront him!.!.!.!.
and just BE HAPPY =] srry if its a little too!.!.!.!. optamistic!.!.!.!.
too many people are depressed in this worldWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like your poem and I think that it is good you finally left your ex bf but you shouldn't let a person that stupid make you sad!. Cheer up :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that was really good, im very sorry he treats you like thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! I can feel the emotion in your words! That was moving! Good luck- I know the right guy is out there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it does not suck at all!. your better of without him!. he just not worth crying over!. cheer upWww@QuestionHome@Com

omg!. thats really good! i'm so sorry about your ex, i hope things start looking better for u!. good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good although it's to sad!.!. But I guess that's the point of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com