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Please criteque!.!.!.!. Spelling is done through check spelling in Australian english!. : )

Illuminating sun, shine and be free,
Noble and magnanimous qualities,
Spiritual goals, strives to achieve,
Passion drives the inspired to -
Endeavor to achieve their dreams,
Righteously with no ill intent,
Acquiring skills to succeed,
Transition made from shredding skins,
Inspires the ocean to flow into springs,
Overcome the serpent beasts,
Never let your foes strike your feet,
Allow them to be your strength,
Loving each other until the end!.

Pride in ones beliefs,
Open mind captures knowledge,
Every artist was an amateur,
Molding sculptures from clay!.

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