Read my poem please and comment?

Question: Read my poem please and comment!?

What once was!.

I loved the way you spoke to me,
the way you would laugh,
the beauty you would see!.

i had so much fun with you,
your smile brightend my day,
and gave me something to look forward to!.

But one petty fight and it's all gone
you walked away from me,
standing alone!.

I has been some time,
and life goes on,
but i still think of what once was!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its good!!.!.!. seems as if you really mean it!. Which is the good part about this poem!.

I feel, and this is just an opinion, that this is more along the lines of prose than a poem!.

The last half!.!.!.from 'But one petty!.!.!.' to '!.!.!.once was' is beautiful! the first half is too plain (for lack of a better word)!.

All in all, its good!. I could relate to the latter!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's sounds good but you should try to make some of the words rhyme!. It will sound better!. Go on the internet, I think there's a special website were there's a rhyming thing!. I like how you made it sound like it's your feelings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it!.
Very deep meaning!. Shows emotion, everything a poem needs!Www@QuestionHome@Com

*yawn*Www@QuestionHome@Com

zomg that almsot made me cry=]]10/10
why do u hate emos!?!=[[Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!.!.!.i think its about ur feelings!.!.
nice translation!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I use t have a once was!.!. we fought over money and once was left:[Www@QuestionHome@Com