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Question: How does this do in ending a tale!?
Trial of Sight
Part Twenty-one
Finally to the retelling of Little Red
Cara woke to scents of wild flowers
placed with care beside her bed
No more nightmares were left
only the warmth of home
“Am I safe now!?”
Her Earth-bound angel came to her side
“No more Big Bad Wolves to haunt you,
Dear Red!.
Rest easy… when you are well
I will take you home!.
Your mother will be expecting you for supper”
How long had it been since she went home!?
Not since the day
her innocents was stolen
The day she hoped, in time,
to forget…
-So this is the end… I think, but this is just me, that this is my best series yet!. I am exceedingly proud that I finished and it has a cohesive, complete feel, unlike all my others… I hope to hear from many of you on this one… don’t leave me out here alone…
Blessed Be in Healing and Love and Light, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A warm, delightful ending to the harrowing tale, with just a hint of residual sorrow as expressed in the last four lines!. I have loved this series and feel a touch of sadness that it is over, as one always feels at the end of a wonderful story!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A good end to this series, my only question was did you mean innocence, rather than innocents!?
Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't you mean 'innocence'!? Need to work on the punctuation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Bravos and bouquets to you Siren!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i have never read ur other series, but these were amazing!!! wow, it was so descriptive and felt sooo real!! GREAT JOB!
(even though i am sad that its over!.!.!.
:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a perfect ending, sweet, but sorrowful, because she is still blind, still suffering the scars left from the wolf!. But there is the hope of home, of a mother's love returned, a grandmother who will fight for her!. There is family, and now, at last, there is security!. As for the Wolf, he will always haunt the corner of her mind, brought out spectacularly by the last two lines!.!.!.
I hope I never forget this series!. Great job, blessed be in love and light and kisses from the muse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com