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Trial of Sight
Part Nineteen

A pain stuck Cara’s face
unseen claw of Half-Blood man
“You are just like your father,”
his voice growling deep
“He could never put me down
neither will you!”
His hands leapt upon her breasts
ripping flesh and drawing blood
“I should have killed you as a child
after having my marry way with you”
Her steady grip on blade slipped
Cara could feel her legs give way
“I will not let you go again…”
His voice trailed off,
his attack fell away
The sound of liquid rising in his throat…
She winced
as they both fell to the ground

-Confused yet!? I hope so… take heart, all will be made clear soon! How is this one for continuing the retelling of Little Red!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm wondering about the marry/merry bit myself!. Aside from that!.!.!.what killed the wolf, I can't wait to find out!. But, because I know you so well, you must understand that I am very far from confused!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, confused, but also enthralled!. Is the knife poisoned!? Magical!? I cannot wait to find out!. You have taken a fairy tale of old and made it new and alive with detail and excitement!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh dear, what a pun on marry/merry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com