What think you of a 'forked tongue' poem?

Question: What think you of a 'forked tongue' poem!?

And as inelegantly coarse
You say sang
To my eyes, ears, back,
( insipidly, stupidly )
Everything curling petals
Brown!.

Feathers, hail, words
Always always!.!.!.fall!.

Incredibly never loose
Valued tears
Of purpose!.!.!.

Diamonds should never
Touch the Earth
Again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I am very sorry; I am not feeling very smart!. I am having some trouble understanding the first four lines, and how this is a forked tongue poem!. Stanza two is extremely pretty!. I have come back to this a few times since you have posted it; perhaps I will get it when I read it again!.

Edited; oops, I misread!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one!!!

Sing!.!.!.!.sing a song!.!.!.
Your teeth are like diamonds!.!.!.they sparkle at night!.!.!.!.
Insipidiously!.!.!.sounds like some bugs mating!.!.!.!.
pin your ears back with clothes pins!.!.!.
Loose feathers cause fluff!.!.!.!.
brown petals!.!.!.like the muddy ones on my bike!.!.!.
Touching the Earth!.!.!.we better or we'll fall off!.!.!.!.

Very Imaginative!.!.!.!.!.eloquent!.!.!.your play on words!.!.!.

Snidely has laced the coffee again!.!.!.!.with dewdrops of homemade mountain dew!.!.!.powerful stuff!.!.!.

Again!.!.!.!.as always!.!.!.
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I would say you have covered it! "Always, always fall, but not the diamonds again!." "You say sang" was a momentary twister as I read!. Maybe you need to work on reducing verbosity! lol Well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ahhh!.!.!.!.!.Their only $2 & $3 dollar words The $10 words come in the end with ur edit!.!.!.!.
Dikshuneeeery That's worth every bit of $10 bucks!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Add up your 2 & 3 dollar words and what you get is this poem !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A classic!.!.!. Worth every cent!!! You've done it again you Wascally Wabbit!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.CheersWww@QuestionHome@Com

May those diamond tears never again fall!. An elegant statement with big words like "inelegantly," "insipidly" and "incredibly!." I like big words in poems!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can feel it as it gains speed
falling
terminal velocity

but touched like the wind of emotionWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!. how could u exert such emotions on paper!.!. !! Picturing conceptual image on a physical layer !. I got the picture !.!.
Nice!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Most touching!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like everything else you do!.!.!.Splendid!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Diamonds should never touch the earth!. I love that image!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very thought provoking!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, especially the last part!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your words that "always always fall"
serve to teach us well!. Thank you this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, it doesn't make any sense to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it
i no i cant write something that goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it soooo :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

um!.!.!.!.!.what!?
but i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its good but put poems online could be easily copied and someone could steal it!!:0Www@QuestionHome@Com