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Question: Opinions on my poems!?
What is going on today!?
I haven't talked to you in weeks
are you avoiding me!?
I hate how the world relies
on lies to operate
when thats no way to
ride through life
I can't wait until you're forced
into my proximity
i'll slip a smile your way
you would never
look back, you're quite afraid
of confrontation
i rely on it every day
I don't know if I could live
any other way
you're so afraid
to look me in the face
i'm not that scary
i don't need you
quite as much as you thought
next time don't let your ego
take a hold of you
i can get a new boy
in maximum five days
if your gonna avoid me i'm gonna
find someone new,
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i like them alot!.!. they are really good!.!. you are very talented!.!.
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well!.!. well!.!. finally a good poem to enjoy!. Appreciate it!
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