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Question: Is my poem number one or number two!?
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TEMPO


From where I sit
I see
forever,
past the forest,
despite the trees,
I hear the tones
from in the sequence,
and the beat
inside of me!.

The noted charts,
the courses plotted,
wind and waves,
a melody,
Resolving chords
on wooden whispers
tapping out
a destiny!.

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I love the rhythm!. I love the rhyme!. I love the contents!. It's # 1!. If you are speaking of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest!.!.!.then it's a # 10!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

absolutely #1


row row row your boat !.!.Tempo might perhaps be considered one of the required elements of existance!.!.!.!. space time and tempo!.
Without sequence and tempo we could have arrived here a puzzle of bits and pieces!.
It put in me in mind of the ancient Athenian galleys and the propulsion method of travel!. !.!. or the Egyptian funeral boats!. this is definately one of your keepers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Definitely a number 1!. There's a child's nursery rhyme about going to Bambury Cross to see a fine lady upon a white horse that was set to a charming melody, your poem and aforementioned melody fit together like Cinderella and her slipper!. It will be in my head all day!. Next thing you know, I'll be dancing!. ONE,two, three; ONE, two, three!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",

What a ridiculous question you have asked on this fine day!. Of course it;s 'No 1!'!.

WELL DONE!

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!.!.!.!. cool!. I noticed clear personification of todays for-closer problem and similes that let the reader relieve him/her mind to the point of discombobulation and psycho analysis!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great title!.

And you execute it with a driving pace, so it lived up to the title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From whwere I sit !.!.!.It looks & sounds like a Beautiful Day !!! An Medley of natural Tunes
,,,# 1 Here on this end !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I'm number two! Nice to meet you number two!!! Austin powers!. I think it's number two!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sings!. Place it at the head of the line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this, I don't think this a #2 at all!. Should Line 7 begin with "from" or "form!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com

# 1 or # 2!.!.!.!. what are you talking about!? please give more infoWww@QuestionHome@Com

Talent yes!.!.!. but sorry to say, number 2 on this one!Www@QuestionHome@Com

NO 1Www@QuestionHome@Com

ThreeWww@QuestionHome@Com