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Question: "Mystery" A poem for comments please!?
Mystery, Divine Divinity
As gentle as neap tides flow, does
morning sun rise, sink for glowing moon!.
Breath taking beauty to behold
moments clarity exposed,
comforting soul within

daily reaching to transend
the dark, Casting shadows
gathered on our human journey
steps of joy and sorrow
lingering reminders to ponder,
Mystery, Divine Divinity

Oh, the pounding human heart
hungers to love and to be loved
in peaceful joy, without struggle
without search of wisdom's love,
wisdom whispers, love is victory in spite of us!.
Mystery, Divine Divinity!.

Mystery!.


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