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Question: Rate my words!?
This is a poem/song that I wrote!. It's basically about people leaving!. Tell me what you think!. =)


We all grow up,
to grow apart!.
Anyone left here with a heart!?
Let me know!.
Let it show!.

The times back when,
used to be so great!.
Now we're filled with burning hate
Keep it in,
Your free from sin!.

The friends i've had,
Have come and gone!.
I sit alone,
But not for long!.
Cause of you!.
You know thats true!.

You saved me from
This wreck of a life!.
You turned around,
With that same knife
You took me down!.
I'm on the ground!.

But pick me up
And if you do!.
Then theres still hope
For me and you
Look inside
You'll be alright
You'll be alright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
which ones do i rate there are so many!?

j/k it was a great write and the feelings your trying to express came out well keep writing

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I really like it!.
Your words are good :)
I can relate!.

critique!?
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