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Question: Critique My Poem: Cheek to Cheek!?
Throw your arms around and hold me tight
Lets touch cheek to cheek
Only words of love all we speak
Release me and let me be free
Try to catch me behind the tree
I will run farther
Try to catch me will be harder
I will settle near the lake
Will rest and have break
You can hold me back again
Hold me tight
And touch cheek to cheek
Words of love all we speakWww@QuestionHome@Com


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This is the sort of poem I'd want to see in a Valentine's Card!. Nice one!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Master piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com