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The Letter
The day the letter came,
The day my life ended,
The day my world seemed to come to a close, an end!.
My father, my best friend, a soldier as brave as any,
A Cornell, a father, a friend,
The day the letter came, my world ended
My mind imagined his last moments-
Did he suffer!?
Did he cry!?
Did he beg!?
Did he think of me, did he think of his daughter, his family!?
My father, my best friend, a soldier as brave as any,
A hostage- left to the mercy of others,
Left to the mercy of those who gave none
The day the letter came,
The day my life ended,
That day my world seemed to come to close, an end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Aw, how sweet,
and sad
According to the letter it talks about your father
as a best friend, a soldier
colonel!.
The line that says the day the letter came my world ended
this says you father died
and he was your world!.
This poem may be called the letter but
it is a token of love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
no matter how depressing- its an art- writing!. You can post them because you love what you do!.Keep Writing!. It's your gift!. I enjoyed reading it!
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why do alot of people post there depressing poems!.
people need to make happier poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I agree to what the first person said about poems
But i find this poem very touching!.
Great Job!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well expressed feelings!.!. direct!.!. honest !.!. carrying a great deal of appreciation to Ur father who was Ur best friend!.U 've the talent !.!.keep on going!.!.wish u the best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com