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Question: Do you like my song/poem!? I call it "I wish I didn't like it"!?
I was born only to die,
Licking the blood stains off your wrist,
I am so lost in the mist,
And I wish I didnt like it!.

After all I have gone through,
I cant wait to see tomorrow,
Life is always so hard to fit,
And I wish I didnt like it!.

I could feel the pounding of your heart,
I cant help but wonder when to start,
The flames of hell have been lit,
And I wish I didnt like it!.

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LUCiFERWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is deep!. I love it!. It's a feeling many people go through when they are down and out!. I believe you are a TRUE poet!. Never let yourself get so down that poetry gets lost somewhere in the back of your mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dont!.

Born only to die
On bloodstained sheets you lie
I lick the blood from your wrist
and wish I did not like it

After all we had been through
It was what I had to do
life so hard it had to end
So I killed you my friend

I feel the pounding of your heart
stopping never to re start
I drink down your warm blood
Why does it taste so goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow that is so hardcore i <3 it
and you people who are calling it emo, learn what emo is before you call us/him emo because you only know steryotypes!.
it's a really good poem, preform your song on you tube then ill get to see you sing it!! it is a song, right!? like you said!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

dont be ridiculous my love, this is the reason why IT created all THIS to find out about IT!. the beauty and the true nature was not reveled, it took a journey to come to this POINT OF VIEWING ITSELF, in all its glory!. Dont tell me this is wrong, where else can I turn for meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it, the ryhming paterns all over the place but it works and using the same last makes it more powerful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Doumb frikin poem, emo as sh*t, evil as hell,

GET A LIFE EMOWww@QuestionHome@Com

odd!.!. and kinda triggered but ur name lucifer!.!.oddWww@QuestionHome@Com

niceWww@QuestionHome@Com