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Question: What do you think of this poem!? (i wrote it)!?
***why did this happen to me!?***
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why did this happen to me!?
i made no mistake
should i suck it up!?
i did nothin wrong
gotta take it in
however i can
life aint nothin
unless you spend it
with people that value you
i wont let mine end
for a stupid decision
that someone made
its their loss
not mine
theyll come back
once they see what they lost
once they see reality
begging
sayin sorry
for all the **** they did and said
i just kow they will
now i know
though i made no mistake
this is a test
to see if ill do whats right
to see if ill forgive
and forget
though i know i cant
ill suck it up
take it in
and do the best i can
now i know
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Well, poems don't have to rhyme (slap across the face), and the meaning is obvious if you actually bother to read it!.!.!. but it kinda seems more like you're venting than writing a poem!. Maybe if you worked on the rhetoric, grammar and punctuation (which do really help poems flow and make more sense) it would be better!. But writing is a great way to vent and figure out who you are in life, so keep it up :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
all poems do not have to rhyme, haikus don't rhyme! cinquain's don't rhyme! They go ny syllables, or # of words!.
it is an okay poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's a bit boring, rambling, and pointless!. Sorry!. It might make a nice rap song but a poem!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
First of all it doesnt rhyme
Second what is the poem suppose to mean
Third i got board through the the beggining
So i didnt finish reading
WHAT IM SAYING IS IT SUCKSWww@QuestionHome@Com
One of the best i have ever heard =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
honestly, ( I'm not bein mean ) it's quite simple and lame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com