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Question: # two !.!.!. one and two posted separately !.!. they did not fit!. I call it The Death Of Sorrow !.!. any comments!?
Kaituer Falls falls!.
Majesty sold to despair!.
Lumber giants,
trees dying
on the Brazilian landscape
not native to the Amazon!.
Exotic Purple Heart
Sickening, lurching, dropping
helpless against a wicked brigade
of switch and trade!.

In a rainless forest
a thundering profusion springs forth!.
Color and celebration
announces a hopeful
morning sky!.
A lie
performed by
industrial morticians
pivoting to spout progress
from the trigger side of their barrels
guns or oil they shoot their plumes high
writing sorrows obituary
on the sky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I always have comments, don't you know!.

You have captured the non-pluss, of the nonplussed!.
As humans there are only so many things we can fit into our useless brain at one time!. 7 is the magic number I think, if we add an 8th problem, we loose one!. Hhmmh!. So which one!.

Foreclosure
Feeding ourselves
finding work
kids in trouble with the law
husband cheating
having a 14 year old pregnant daughter
ailing or dying parents/husband/wife
son's and daughters at was in- well wherever
gas prices
Worry, worry, worry!.
Earth's destruction!? Now there is a priority, but next to our personal problems most have no room, other than a passing thought or comment!.
I am glad you have taken of your time to open eyes, I hope the ones who are fighting for our planet can add another vigilante to their clan because they read you wonderful words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sierra Club member, you speak well of greed versus Earth!. I liked the reference to sorrows obituary on the sky as it inferred smoke to me!. "Progress" carries a heavy price!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Industrial morticians" "Sorrows obituary"
"The Death Of Sorrow!?!?"

Clever play on words, good topic, nice poem!.
The title goes over my head, How can the sorrow be dead!?Www@QuestionHome@Com