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Question: More of my Con-verb + Neomans!?
check these out and tell me if they are Con-verb, Proverb or neither!.!.!.!.!.
By Galactia7
If a car can run off the Smell of an oily rag,
Than why does mine consume so much petrol!?
I have the will to live,
I have the will to die!.
I can foretell your future,
As, you live in my past!.
Have you got good credit!?
Have a Spending spree with Duck platinum Unlimited Credit Card,
Sorry sir, purchase denied as credit card limit reached!.
Why do we still pay our goods with gold!?
When the value of Marijuana is higher!?
It's fortunate to win the lotto,
to receive inheritance is unfortunate!.
Life is gone in a blink of an eye,
But death last for eternity!.
To cleanse our selves in pur water,
You must first abstract our sins!.
A blind man may not see through visual perception,
But can certainly see through in depth, deception!.
By Neonman
Winning the lotto
will change your life
provided the taxes
don't bankrupt you first!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm not telling which is my favorite!.!.!.heheheWww@QuestionHome@Com
In my opinion, most of these read like proverbs, although they contain the spirit of the Con-verb!. Try setting them up like Neonman's Con-verb!. Edit carefully!. Example: to cleanse "ourselves" v "You" must first!. It should read "We must first!.!.!." Be consistent!.
shop 'til you drop
but do not reach
your limitWww@QuestionHome@Com
The big question is
Why is lotto won by so few!?
Spending to gain
has it's price, I guess!.
Good effort - I think you are getting more proverbial than con-verbial Gal!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not sure what verb they are but I enjoyed them :) Sorry I didnt emerse myself in books in school, so I am at a loss to tell you what they are but they both humored me and made me thinkWww@QuestionHome@Com
I would call them proverbs and some of them are a scream!.
Very creative!. If you don't make it as a poet you should try philosophy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com