“Congratulations!”
"you have just won Monday night’s lotto of $1,000,000"!.
Chance: take 3 steps back
Pay income tax 0f $2,000,000
Bankrupt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this at all a Con-verb? please critique...Cheers! : )?Question: Is this at all a Con-verb!? please critique!.!.!.Cheers! : )!? “Congratulations!”
"you have just won Monday night’s lotto of $1,000,000"!. Chance: take 3 steps back Pay income tax 0f $2,000,000 Bankrupt!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Here is the quote from TD: The Con-Verb (opposite of a Proverb) is meant to be a rude little squawk about anything that bothers the author!. There are no rhyme and meter requirements!. The only rules in Con-Verbs are: they must be short and to the point, they must have a barbed tale or other sharp stick at the end!. Winning the lotto will change your life provided the taxes don't bankrupt you first! Yours, has the barb but is $2mil tax on $1min lotto believable!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Cut down on the verbiage, eliminate all words that do not add to the power of your work, check your spelling carefully before posting!. Once you do so, you will have a viable Con-verb!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very funny!. And all too true!. I like the overall flow of ideas you present here!. Pretty ironic, isn't it, that what we might see as luck is often the wrong kind of luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not bad!. It is a little word-heavy!.!.!.the third line is not necessary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |