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Question: I need a Title!.!.!.!.and opinions please!?
Came the Angels , I'm told
One hunderd fourty four fold
Through Equinox door loud as thunder!.
And with first breath their soul
Wonders what to behold
Of this world full of color and wonder
Found in time, so it seems
Mankind trading his dreams
For vanity and precious metals
The religion all told,
Is a vain quest for gold
A rose frought with all thorn , but naught petal
Yet we deal our own hand
Always knowing the plan
Never works without love for our brother
But our brother it seems
Lost the path to his dreams
Now stands cold to the touch of another
If they reach us in time
Will he find peace of mind
Will he share with us lifes hidden pleasure
Heavens there if you see
Love from you and from me
The key finding this lifes secret treasure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A Rose of Thorns
Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well, after reading this, I'm not sure if I can give you a title because it's just too good for me judge!.
This poem is simply beautiful, excellent, awesome, smooth, etc!. I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Angels Secrets!.
The bright beginnings, the promise, the change, the betrayal and yet always a hope!.
Well done, it flowed well to me as I read!. My complimentsWww@QuestionHome@Com
Never look outside of the poem for its title, it is always lying somewhere in the poem!. With this said; the title I would give this poem is "Lifes Secret Treasure/s"Www@QuestionHome@Com
you have to make your own title, youll find it, itll be more special if you find the title, its gotta be original unique and newWww@QuestionHome@Com
Quest of Humanity
Angels Lost
Brothers LostWww@QuestionHome@Com
great poem, very intricate!. For the title i would say something like:
Greed
Greed Kills
The Greed that Kill us All
The Forgotton Treasure
Well Done :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
i dont really get it and im not good with poems
but this looks and sounds rilly good
i think u shood name it a powerful,dark, mysterious kind of one word title/name
good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com
Inevitable Angels
I love it and it is very well written!Www@QuestionHome@Com