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Question: Would u comment!? all are invited ;)!?
Yes dear, I could I dared
To press the numbers once you me gave
Yes I could, and then I felt my heart
Beats strongly, no blood to save!.

Tren, tren, tren !. !. !. and then your voice
Revived the soul, how smooth
Caught my breath, hold my tear
Your voice traveled into the ear!.

What a pleasure to hear your voice
Forget all around even the noise
Of the children were around you
Was music to dance on with you!.

Formal words were spelled
Felt your anguish, made me knelt
To hear you louder, to save the tone
Of your voice, to kiss the phone!.

You talked and I listened
To every sound, till you finished
The speech of you and of my
Ended sadly with "Good Bye"

Don’t know what you thought
Of me and if you caught
Your heart as I did
Not to fall from the chest!.

Two weeks your voice made me happy
Till the magic has vanished and I am afraid
Of what you thought of what you said
Now I know how much I was silly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice!.It has some power that I can feel from here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not badWww@QuestionHome@Com