What think you of a sonnet in meter only?

Question: What think you of a sonnet in meter only!?

Tinseled drops slant eastward, towards the Sun,
Bending leaves with soft, aromatic rain!.
Dawn approaches in light, yellow flaming!.!.!.
Leisurely deciding what robe to wear

Later!.!.!.when heat usurps the tender day!.
Dawn's Eye rejects blue, shuns haze!. Decision's
A dark side of Nature!. Thunderous side!.
Come noon! Come evening! Lightning tridents

Spear rainbows, impale them as 'needed' for
Our senses!. Our need of beauty in the storm!.
In the gentle evening, rainbows show
The way home, the paths we should have taken!.

Fear not, traveler! In the midst of storms
Ever shines the Light of courage and hearth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Elyslund,

You tread where no mere mortals exist! There is one thing I have to say!.!.!. Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds! Your work is like a pop up storybook with vivid details and colors and I can't wait until the screenplay is written!. Even Steven Spielberg would say "ISHKABIBEL! I need at least four years just to put the special effects together!" ROFLOL!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is too bad that the only way you can have rainbows is as the aftermath of a storm, sort of like having to accept the bad in order to know good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like a lot of this!.

I love tinseled drops!.

and I love the line:

Our senses!. Our need of beauty in the storm!.

Some nice lines and phrasing in this piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice, but i have a different opinion from the others, i try to take my evaluations on a different system than others!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fear not, Editor, I am sailing in your direction!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it seams like a guided meditation
brings me out of these three walls
and back into life wear it all began!.
wear it should be!.
its a tastey refresher from the gray Storm clouds thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is so exquisite!. Each line, each word is precise and beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sonnet, so nice, so rhythmic, so good, so far!.

So you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, Light of courage and hearth overcomes any fear in the
stormiest of storms!.
Thank you for a wonderful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A perfect description of Southern summer days!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What do I think, no words to express this great poem!.You constantly amaze me!.You are in a league all your own!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem is a work of genius!. Once again, I am itching to explicate it, but this is not the place!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a good one!.!.!.a keeper!.!.!.the beginning of something good!.
Good to see you back
!.!.!.on track!.

hmmmm!.!.!.!.no chickens, coffee or elves tho"!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

KewlWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ah!.!.!.and I was so hoping for rhyme! lol!. A wonderful sonnet with great images!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com