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To Separate

This love is all
Enormous a soul
And serene an ocean
Of treasons
All out and thought
Of horrors and pavillions

In itself it collects
In a cup
Half of it rain
The other cut into

Should hate exist
It itself out of love
In itself a vacuum
Vast and far
A convultion revolving
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its a poem dol if no body gets it of can find it like you put it is probably not at your level of crazy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The separation is abrupt, as the fourth line falls like a knife to the heart!. This is a reflective poem, a very visual one, about the painful end of a beautiful relationship!. Unfortunately, love sometimes does descend into hate!. To me hate is more than just a waste of time, it actually bleeds your soul dry!. This poem is both pensive and evocative!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You lost me on this one!. If it means something to use as it reads, that's great!. I just don't get an impact of understanding from it; not enough words for me, I suppose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good
complete the sentense the other cut into
end should be happy endingWww@QuestionHome@Com