How does this feel for the start of something?

Question: How does this feel for the start of something!?

Trial of Sight
Part One

Gun is c*cked and at the ready
barrel pointed at her skull
An enemy of the state
a charlatan and witch
She has committed crimes
beyond compliant sight
The judge has been self ordained
and her sins have been self inflicted
but Cara cannot relent her stance

-This will be part one in a short series if you will bare with me and read through…Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I sure HOPE you mean "bare," let's get naked!. Sometimes I enjoy your sirenisms more than anything!. At any rate, you come flying out of the gate with this one, with a loaded gun aimed at our (presumed) heroine's head!. That sure is an attention getter!. Can't wait for the next episode!. Until then, I promise to read all your poems in the nude!.

Blessed be Siren, who gives so much to all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that it's a BRILLIANT start of something fantastic!. ^^ Way to go!

I'm sorry for being such a picky person!.!.!.but when you say one must 'bare' with you, it must be spelled 'bear!.' Otherwise, it sounds like you want someone to strip to their birthday suit with you!.!.!.:P Again, I apologize!.!.!.but your grammar and spelling will come to perfection eventually!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

How fabulous- a new series! This one has an exciting and dramatic beginning!. It is as enigmatic as it is eloquent!. I am very intrigued!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

helluva way to start something off! You got my attention!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.:O)))Www@QuestionHome@Com