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-the rainbow of you and me-

the color red is for my heart;
which your love fills up!.
orange is happiness;
what you make me feel!.
yellow is the sun;
which is bright, like your smile!.
green is the earth;
which love is taking over!.
blue as in the ocean;
& our love is even deeper!.
purple is passion;
what i feel for you!.
pink is how my face turns,
but only when i see you!.

okay, i'm only 13 and this is only like, my 3rd poem,
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