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Question: !.!.how about this poem!?
i just wrote this!. what do you think!? any suggestions!? oh&&btw i'm 11!.
Life is like rain!.
It falls slowly down in pieces from the sky!.
It goes down and down until it hits the ground!.
Then you’re lost!. Stuck!.
Wait!.
Did you forget!?
Rain evaporates!.
You lift up and climb back to the top!.
Everything’s clear!.
But you have to come back down again!.
That’s what it’s about!.
In life there’s ups and downs!.
Twists and turns!.
Good and bad!.
Just enjoy while you’re on top!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love it u should think about poem school this the top 15 in my poems i love and ur number 2 i love it sooooooo much cuz its about life you no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!.
i almost drop a tear;) in happenisWww@QuestionHome@Com
you have rushed it a bit but ou write good poetry!. this is my poem im also 11!.
im gonna start a poery blog if people like it
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Normally I'll be honest here, I hate this kind of poetry, I feel it is crude and to direct, but I find your honesty a breath of fresh air, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You just posted this, can you not just wait a minute and let people post !? Give other people a shot to be heard
I don't mind a good thumbs down every now and thenWww@QuestionHome@Com
really nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is so true and awesome!.Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com