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Question: How do you celebrate your wedding anniversary!?
Anniversary
by Elaine P

In my dream
I see your face
hear your laughter soar
touch you on this Day of Days
as I did before…

I awake
to darkened room
on this Night of Nights
blindly, I reach out for you
then switch on the lights…

Which is dream
and which is real
why are you not here
once again I close my eyes
and dream you laughing there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
why a depression type poem for wedding aniversary!?
write some good moments and happy momomentsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Dreams can be cruel!. When reality is stark - the dream's image is more pronounced!. How blessed it is to be able to wake and then "continue" off again - in the same dream (especially if it is pleasing)!. The mind of the dreamer - must have been - very entranced in the subject!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

These dreams can be hard, but they keep our memories alive!. I can hear the pain woven through these poetic words and I don't know what to say except my heart weeps for you on this day!. Through this poem, you have shown us that, although we lose the ones we love, we don't lose the love we have for them or the love they gave us!. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautifully spoken!. It brings a lump to the throat!.!.!.!.and makes me decide not to be such a grumpy old nag to my dear one!.

Grief
As I reached the corner
You disappeared!.
Yet, I was sure I saw you there!.
I recognised your tilt of head,
Your ambling gait!.
Why did you not wait!?
Why are my glimpses
Always just that tiny bit too late!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so tender and sad!. Each beautifully painted image adds to the poignancy of this poem!. I sense the longing is so great that the line diffuses between sleeping and waking dream!. This touched my heart in a very profound way!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is bittersweet, from the joy of memory to the reality of truth!. Take comfort always in the memories!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I hear your message!. It's beautiful!.

Bittersweet, haunting!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You almost had me crying there but beau ti should make us laugh out loud and so I'm laughing out loud at the thought of almost cryingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I understand this poem deeply!. I am glad you are able to relive your dreams and memories!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you Elaine, This poem is a keeper, I do relate to this
celebration completely! You said it best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am touched deeply!. To say more than that would probably be too much said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!"
Thats a lovely, teary eyed poem!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nirvana !.!.!.!. just a dream away! well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You made me cry!!
Thank God for dreams and memories!.!.!.this is beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you did it!? you are so goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh my!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tear making!. I'm sending a hug to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just like this!.!.!.!.that's how!.


Note to h!.b!.g!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.These are the happy moments my friend!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com