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Question: Another poem =)!?
Somebody asked to see another poem so here is another one i wrote!. Kind of sad though =(!.
Wake me up when all this is done
Because i can't take this pain
Baby i know I'm the one
Please don't get in that plane
You called me over one morning
To tell me the bad news
Before you told me you gave me a warning
You said you couldn't choose
What were you trying to say!?
Because i was confused
You were trying to tell me in a way
That wouldn't leave my heart bruised
You would open your mouth to speak
But nothing would come out
I could tell that you were weak
Until you began to shout
"I have to leave, I'm moving away
It's not my choice but i have to go
Baby i wish I could stay
And this is all you have to know"
I stared at her beautiful eyes
I could feel the tears coming down
I didn't want to say my good byes
So in my tears i began to drown
All i could do was sit and cry
Because i didn't know what else to do
So i got up and said goodbye
And I told her I love youWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes this is sad
and more so for the
people you love or friends
Moving away is never easy
because depending on where you move
will take some adjusting!.
and time to get used to!.
if its far away you will miss those people
I can see why the tears came down your face
and why you were so choked up to mention
this!.
One paragraph saying
--------------------------------------!.!.!.
I have to leave, I'm moving away
Its not my choice but I have to go
This is trying to break the news to them
The last two lines say Baby I wish I could stay
And this is all you have to know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
freakin amazing!. AGAIN!. please write more! im captivated by your words!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That was so beautiful! I loved it!!! Keep it up that was really excellent!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its excellent you definetely have talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As good as the other one, both excellent!. Want more =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
:-) good good but sad :(Www@QuestionHome@Com
so sad
i love it!
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