Whats your opinion of this poem I wrote?

Question: Whats your opinion of this poem I wrote!?

The senators face is a hemmorhoid
looking for a burning flame
a train rolling down the tracks
a mutilated penis
struggling to be seen as beauty
a shunned and painful experiment
feces baked into a salad
fools eating their own feces
in blissful ignorance
the mutilated penis weeps
forgotten and unlovedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I enjoy it, even though the descriptions are a little more vision-inducing than I would have preferred!.
Dont listen to these other people!. Its good, they just cant stomach the details!.

The only issue I have with it is the repetition of the word 'feces' and 'mutilated'!. Personally, I check it out with a thesaurus for some more words of the same meaning!.

Otherwise, I like it in a morbid little way!. x)Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you were going for the mutated zombie impression, you nailed it! ;) But seriously, I think you have some serious problems with your thought processing, I think you should write more poems, but with more likable, less mutilated protagonists!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ok i dont really like the idea of the penis but its pretty good the way u used metaphors and the language structure!. id like to see u use a different objective and write another one!.

goodluck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

feeling it!.strange is good,sometimes,this was pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Terrible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Crap!. If it wasnt about feces and penis, it'd be good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is good!. Just a little bit weird!.

Sorry, but you wanted the truthWww@QuestionHome@Com

umm its !.!.!.!.!.!.!. uniqueWww@QuestionHome@Com

let's just say that anyone who read this would get a brightener on their day!. and i'm not being sarcastic either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its so touchingWww@QuestionHome@Com

no motion or rhythm,please includeWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is lame!. Be careful or we'll assume you are too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com