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Question: Anyone care to comment on this poem about broken love!?
Got Any Glue!?

With eyes wide shut
I thought I knew you;
with heart wide open
I let myself fall!.

But I lost starry eyed
innocence
to the years
along with hope;
youthful dreams!.

We tried it all; but
everything was too small
to conquer such a big mistake!.
So you go your way
and I’ll go mine!.

Somewhere in this world
there are two others
just as lost,
picking up broken pieces,
trying to find the right stuff;
the right person
to put their lives
back together again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There is always loss in love!. I like the way you expressed the loss in this poem and I especially like the ideas and emotions expressed in the last stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Joy and sorrow walk hand in hand, and love looks on in wonder why!? Yet, I think finding the joy is on the inside, not
out side through some one else!.
yet what you say is what people do look for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was very well written!. and made a lot of sense with a meaning that everyone who has lost love could understand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How we are blinded by love and the light of reality is all around!.

Very well put!.Www@QuestionHome@Com