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Question: This is a love poem I wrote for mi amor Dec 07!. Tell me what you think!?! pleae dont steal Thanx :O)!?
Confession
If love is like the ocean
My heart is the Red Sea
Your soul is like the River Nile
That flows right into me
I loose myself within your kiss
Your spell, it pulls me in
And when you gaze into my eyes!.!.!.!.!.I find I'm lost again
Your voice, Your touch - The heat, The rush
!.!.That takes my breath away
It's more than lust
True love, True trust
Is what makes me feel this way
You are all that I will ever need
A rareity among men
If angels walk amongst the Earth
You must be heaven sent
My love for you will never change
Though trails will come, and go
I am yours forever
!.!.!.Just wanted you to know
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It's a well thought out poem!. You've avoided the traditional syrup and expressed some interestingly creative phrases that are particularly fascinating !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
my love for you will never change
though trails will come, and go
I am yours forever
!.!.!.!.just wanted you to know!.
and I also love your second stanza as well!.!.!.!.
I lose myself wthin your kiss
Your spell, it pulls me in
and when you gaze into my eyes
!.!.!.!.I find I'm lost again!.
Very nicely phrasing and the flow is just beautiful and ties it altogether perfectly!. Well done!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
hmm, a nice romatic little poem!. People still believe in a love like that, it is hard to believe, but if you have found it, make sure you keep it safe and pray to whoever was thoughtful enough to think of you for this gift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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