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Question: Judge this Poem as if this were Poetic idol or something!?
A story so real that we can all feel
Filled with worries, sadness, and lies
A story of happiness, anger and fear
That were all forced to call life

You dont decide who your parents would be
Or the people you meet along lifes path
But ofcourse you can pick your own destiny
But the end either way is death

With diffrent begginings, middles, and ends
With diffrent parents, customs, and friends
With people, places, and beliefs to defend
Yet, through it all the end is death

A story so real that we can all feel
Filled with worries, sadness, and lies
A story with happiness, anger, and fear
Where the end!.!.!.!.!.is always we die


Its called the end is death
I wrote it 2 years ago but nobody judged seriously because i was 13 years oldWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It`s okay I wouldn`t say you would be the poetic idol; it just needs a little work!. My favorite part of it was,

"With different beginnings, middles, and ends
With different parents, customs, and friends
With people, places, and beliefs to defend
Yet, through it all the end is death!."Www@QuestionHome@Com