Maybe I shouoldn't have gone there?

Question: Maybe I shouoldn't have gone there!?

So Sad I Am

The hole in my soul
Tears I can’t control
How to pay this toll
The cost of what she stole

No more possessions
Useless confessions
Misguided obsessions
Whirlwind directions

As anger depletes me
Minute goals defeat me
This hunger eats me
Lost what completes me

Where do I begin
What waits if I win
Why bother again
When will this end

Not a good day to be alone

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

too late!.

what completes you is not
in the pain that you've bought
dig deeper, say i
for that which you try
cannot be found
in the earthly bound
tis illusion to think
that youve stood on the brink
when all that youve lost
is merely the cost
of a trinket or two
what remains
is you

clarification needed here
i apologize!.!.!.not intended to trivialize but only to point out that the most importanat thing!.!.!.yourself!.!.!.!.is intact !. ty for words well spent!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a good exercise piece!. The meter is stronger than the rhyme!. You have the beat, naturally!. Now, in the Burmese style, back the rhymes up one word in each successive line, then go back around:

*****
As anger depletes me
Minute me, defeated
Me, the hungry
Eats me
Lost complete me

*****Www@QuestionHome@Com

S!.2, the story of my life!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG!.!.!.!.!.Bravo!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com