pink, green, blue
wat shirt shall i choose!?
im at the store with my endless card
not knowing wat to do!.
should i buy three or two!?
wat to do o wat to do
i leave unsatisfied with a shirt
and just one pair of shoes!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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wat shirt shall i choose!? im at the store with my endless card not knowing wat to do!. should i buy three or two!? wat to do o wat to do i leave unsatisfied with a shirt and just one pair of shoes!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: you my dear are what we humans call the next Paris Hilton!. no talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Panini, Sometimes bad criticism is a part of the game in this post and to tell you the honest truth your prose need a lot more work! You do have imagination working heavily in your favor and I'm read a lot worse, but we as a group who are supposed to give honest opinions should be a little more courteous to the author! If you want to be taken seriously as a writer here you must up your game with every entry you submit for the opinion of your peers!. Some people have read my serious side in this post, but I have the sweet childish side just like Frosted Mini Wheats! Here's a freebie!.!.!. ANY COLOUR YOU WANT Red, Pink, Green, Blue What colour clothes do you think I'll choose!? Plain, Plaid, Dots, Stripes What is the style that I'm wearing tonight!? Cotton, Cords, Silk, Knit I don't know what to wear and I'm having a fit It's up to everyone To pick any colour you want Turn yourself around Everyone! I want to be a fashionable guy I want a suit with a matching tie Don't need a girl with those fashion blues How 'bout a hat and a new pair of shoes!? It's up to everyone To pick any colour you want Turn yourself around Everyone! Everyone! There, you go girl! I can be a freak when I hit the boutique!.!.!. Grade D+!. Come with your Prada or it's 'nada'!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 'wat' is spelled what!. 'i' is capitalized also!. The poem sounds like only a rich girl could appreciate, maybe sent it to Paris Hilton!. But its yours, write what you want!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i feel its kind of childish!. but i love the fact that it rhymes!. please check on my question: http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it is people like you that are the origin of the blonde stereotypes!. yo are an idiot and this is not poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com brilliant poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com shallow and childish!. no offense, but true!.Www@QuestionHome@Com needs some work but it is a startWww@QuestionHome@Com its ok!. it rhymes but its shallow!. poems are meant to have a deeper meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com let me guess, you're american!. it's stupid!. just being honest :]Www@QuestionHome@Com |