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Question: Will you read this poem and rate it!?
can you feel the love bleeding from my heart
draining away from our very start!. foolishly
waiting for your very touch while all this
time I have been missing you so much!. And if
finally I could see there hasn't been a moment
I could be that person that always was the one
you could truly love!. As the fog finally
clears a path through all these endless dreams
I catch the slightest glimpse of what you
truly mean and once again I am lost inside
your mind wondering if what I felt was divine!.
I miss the way you whisper in my heart, the
thought of your touch, from even the very
start!. If only you could see how much I really
care, and finally show you that I have always
been there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
out of 1- 10, 100000!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.this cud be an awsome song too!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i adored it!.
it was capturing, yet truthful
and it had a bit of everything in it!.
i really liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com

sounds like a song i heard b4Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats beautiful!! Give it to the one who it is written about!. Oh I would just melt if someone wrote something like that for me!.
10+Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. that was really strong!. I really liked it!. 10 out of 10!. It was beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I, um, didn't like it!. I'd give it about a 5/10!.
It seemed unorganized and cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful, simply beautifull!.
100/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

The breaks in the lines seem random!.

6/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, thas really good!. I wish I could write that well O!.OWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it !. 10/10 from meWww@QuestionHome@Com

good job - a 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I swear I have been reading poems from artists of all kinds all day, and this is the best one so far! x3

11/10!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh!. my!. god!. yes!. shell love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com