Everyone says im a good poet, am i?

Question: Everyone says im a good poet, am i!?

this is the first poem i wrote!.!.!.!.let me know what you think!.!.

My feelings for you were so real, but now my heart is in pieces and i dont think it could ever heal!.
You were once my entire life, I truly believe
one day i'd become your wife!.
I believed your every lie, except for the time
you told me goodbye!. I fell in love with you so fast,
but i guess this "thing" with us could never last!.
I loved you so much but why couldnt i see,
that you and i just weren't meant to be!?!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like the poem, from what I can tell
this is about a relationship or marriage
that went sour because of the lies
Your husband betrayed your trust
You had feelings for him you felt
the same
The love was so quick
you didn't see what he was like
in time,
until one day you became his wife
and he walked out on you
You said that last line very well
All I can say is shame on him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem is wonderful!. A "first" poem that says a lot!!! Filled with passion and disappointment, that comes through beautifully!.
Trim the "excess words" from it, add a little punctuation and voile' !. !. !.

My feelings were so real;
now my heart is in pieces
and I'm not sure it will ever heal!.

You were once my entire life,
wanted to become your wife;
believed your every lie
till you told me goodbye!.

I fell for you so fast;
really thought it would last!.
I guess I loved you so much
I just couldn't see
that you and I
just weren't meant to be!.

What will you title it!? I suggest "First Love"!.
Real nice job of expression!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like that poem
but it takes talent to do more than one good one
so if you have any more try put them up id like to read them
could you read my poem
http://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's nice, but it's the same as almost every other love poem out there!. Are you fishing for compliments!? Cause if people said you were good already, confirming it like this is a bit!.!.!.!.

Read my poem!?

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Yes a very good free verse poem!. If it is your first you are quite talented!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's very good!. Nicely done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was really good ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow i really like that poem
your a good poetWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes, im stealing this poem,thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think your quite goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes you are, because this is really!.!.!. goodWww@QuestionHome@Com