Do not mock me fool
I see the wisdom
You hide!.
With bells on
You can not trick me
slight of hand
sharp wit
You think i jest!.
Make a song and dance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I see the wisdom You hide!. With bells on You can not trick me slight of hand sharp wit You think i jest!. Make a song and dance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: doesn't make any since whatsoever!. why would you call someone a fool if you see wisdom within them!? u r just making stuff up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Diamond-hard language, wordplay ("slight of hand", "song and dance," "You hide/with bells on", and the double meaning of "You think I jest" -- Note to everyone else: Read it as if it were 2 two-word sentences!.) very good and rewarding to pursue and think about!. Try to publish this, it's ready!. Thanks for sharing!. Hope you give us more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think they're coming out of the woodwork here :O))))) (the idiots) To me this speaks of a wisdom that hides behind a facade of foolery!. !. !. !. and has been discovered!. Thusly, the one thought to be the 'jester' becomes the wise one and the hidden wise becomes the fool!. Neat mind poem indeed!!! I love material that makes me think and move around the gray matter a bit!. Very well done!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com wow that is F*u*king amazing!. I love love love it!. I love the Ironic word choice, the contradicting language and the message you send!. it is so crazy it is amazing!. You got talent kid keep it up!. Do not listen to the morons that do not understand poetry, they have no talent and do not understand our art!. Everything is not suppose to be spelt out for you I like the mystery!. I love the way you have to search for a meaning and interpret it yourself!. Thanks for giving me that to read you are one of the few that post here who actually have a clue what the F*ck poetry actually is!. I LOVE IT, Can't wait till you have new ones up here, I look forward to reading them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Even through my migraine in full torrential swing!.!.!. or maybe because of this I applaud your writing!. Poems are supposed to be our own and oblique or wide open if you can provoke the masses to respond you have done an outstanding job!. Cheers and carry on with your writing and wherever it takes you enjoy the trip!.!.!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com Do not mock me fool for I have a cue for pool And with it easily I could take out your eye With sleigh of Hand you can't me trick I may look daft I ain't thick You think I jest where there I rest But my case thereon Rests with Bells onWww@QuestionHome@Com i love idiots that don't understand poetry and think that everything should be taken in the literal sense i'd have to study the poem to try to understand its meaning but it seems very interestingWww@QuestionHome@Com I liked it!. Screw the morons on here that dont understand, they just dont know any better I suppose!. I get it, and I think that you are talented!. Keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com !?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com and i will kick and hollier good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com CoolWww@QuestionHome@Com wut!?!?/!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com dont get itWww@QuestionHome@Com uhm, okay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The next Eminem!!! Or not!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |