I wonder if she knows..?

Question: I wonder if she knows!.!.!?

A day without you…

Leaves a hole in me
Tears my soul from me
Takes its toll on me
Sets a goal with me
Makes clear the role for me

A night in your arms…

Now it reminds me
How it defines me
Sometimes it blinds me
Love it confines me
Again it aligns me

rad060402Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I like the day and night differences in the poem!. Oddly it reminds me of a chef that takes one main ingredient and prepares it two ways on the dish-The same idea yet uniquely different if that makes senseWww@QuestionHome@Com

Dear poet,

Might I suggest "Void" in place of "Hole" and "Always" in place of "How"!.

Are love, few can explain it but many feel the affects of it!.

Well penned!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

How bout checking L6 - the meter seems to be a little off!. Suggestion - eliminate "Makes" and say "Clears the role for me" instead!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved it all , you are very versatile, been reading your poems for a little while! The stuff just seems to flow out of you!!!
Cheers!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tear your soul from you
I Do Not,
Remind,Define,Love, I Do!

[ oops, sorry] Another one For The Heart!
You Write So Many Dreamy Words,I Wonder,
Sir,are you Truly So Romantic!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

lucky lady!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awsomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow! I hope she does, Great work again TrebWww@QuestionHome@Com

AWESOME! I love it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

How could she not know!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love your workWww@QuestionHome@Com

awww that was sweet!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Superb! I do hope she knows!.!.!.!. I especially love the last stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com