Any comments on this poem please?

Question: Any comments on this poem please!?

Flame

The war,
the economy;
filtered news
shadows my world
and gives me the blues
till I wake and realize
that life really is good
as seen through my own eyes
rather than an interpretation!.

Now, I rely on my own
determination
to be positive in a world
that wants to feeds me
upon its garbage!.

It is said we are what we eat,
then
let me feed upon the goodness
that still burns inside of man,
and carry that flame,
that torch,
that hope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I'm not poetic at all!. I'm a painter!.

The first three lines where music to my ears! Anything of that nature sings the nature of my paintings!.

If this is your poem, I give you a salute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If this is your poem !.!.!.
if not then its still a great one!.!.!.

That poem is really Good i love it ha ha its brings up how all the bad things in life cant have control on us we cant let it bring us down and how if we cant really do anything about it then we need to make life worth living and in joy what we have in our liefs like family and love and all the things we have or what we were blessed with which is a Way better attitude because what is the point in grieving its just wasting you life away and i know that when something bad has happend to you its easy er said then done but i really like the words that you used to describe everything it painted a beautiful pitcher in my mind thanks for the wonder full poem if you wanted to thought try and make it just a littler more deep but its is pretty much perfect in my opinion

hope this helped you should put more uppp!!!! good luckkk!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes if you stick your head in the sand you're find ignorance can be bliss!. i'm not saying you shoud take the Weigh of the world on you're shoulders, just do what you can stand for what you believe in!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A wonderful prayer!. Great last stanza!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The word "garbage" seems out of place!. Otherwise it is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. Republicans won't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! You seem to express yourself very well!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! it's very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com