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Question: From the island to the sea!. Come with me!?
Aquatic Soul

Slipping to the ocean floor
In your warm plastic cocoon
Tethered to the mother ship
Unaware of sun or moon

Your task to tap into the earth
Providing comfort for the masses
Floating free while you toil
Sustained by natural gasses

Images filter by aquatic guests
Suspended in their domain
Visiting for your prescribed time
After you they’ll still remain

Amazing sights incredible risks
The tales that you could tell
Safe on top and warm again
Cradled within the bell

Working blind mechanical magic
The stress the job demands
Directed by your inner ear
As your wallet expands

Orders sent down from up above
On those your life depends
Steering you on towards your goal
Kept safe watched over by friends

Amidst the bubbles playing the odds
Submersing as long as you can
Breathe in breathe out as you rise
All part of a master plan

Back on the surface zeroed out again
Once more deemed a survivor
Under pressure all the time
Such is the life of a diver

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is an exciting and brilliantly written account of the diving experience!. The title is perfect and leads me to believe that you are an "aquatic soul" yourself in order to write with such precise beauty!. I can only vicariously appreciate the experience, "unaware of sun or moon" and visited by "aquatic guests"!. Lovely images like this grace the entire poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Going down - in a diving bell - has always been a fantasy of mine - as something I would have liked to have done!. I would never risk scuba diving - the fear of a big fish - having me for dinner - is too much for my mind to take - total anxiety - I've even had dreams about it!. See - all the things that can surface from just reading a poem - and you didn't even mention FISH!. Thanks for the memory ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I always thought it would be magical and beuatiful to see the ocean floor!.!.!.But I'm very chlaustrophobic so the thought of being in all that gear scares the bejeebus out of me!
Thanks for the peaceful journey we accompany you on here!
Very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Water water every where, The water I like is on the top!
Above, to swim, to float, to sail on!.
Fathom deep scares me, But I love to watch it on TV!.
Thank you for a peek at what you have seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

S5L1 and S6L4, seemed rough to me!. Otherwise, a fine write!. Are you taking a vacation with that fat wallet!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Fabulous writing!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

loooool
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