Blind, to see
Beauty are the women of the world
in rainbow colors and tribal sounds
for a Mother's love envelopes all
make us blind to finally see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Beauty are the women of the world in rainbow colors and tribal sounds for a Mother's love envelopes all make us blind to finally see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: For me, the single best thing about living in New York City is that I get the opportunity to see beautiful young women from all over the world!. And they ALL look good to me!. God is good!. You've taken the words right out of my mouth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!" you just captured the hearts of all the woman around the world!. I'm not sure about the last line though!. as it dosn't make it flow as smoothly!. but i'm no poet!. but all and all, I love it!. I just tried to re-phrase the last line!. but could not replace the existing words!. To take away the words you used in the last line, would take away ir's meanning!. YOU DONE WELL! : ) Movie time, Cya tomorrow!. night night i will take that nap lol!.!.!. cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com I personally don't like brown, but your poem is great!. The metaphor is beautiful, and I'm sure many, many women are swooning right now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't know if we are blind but the trolls are!. You know we can not say someone is retarded, we have to say they are mentally challenged!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes and you have to open your blind to see them sometimes!. Get out and see the beauty the world has to show!. Lovely poem NeonmanWww@QuestionHome@Com well the colors of the rainbow are pretty, but not ALL colors are pretty, ya know what I mean!?!.!.!.=DWww@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful sentiment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely poem!. Yes, all colors are beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely!Www@QuestionHome@Com Meter is good if you pronounce it as "fin'lly"!. Niely pennedWww@QuestionHome@Com "Every thing is beatiful in it's own way!."Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely and profound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Great poemWww@QuestionHome@Com well, noWww@QuestionHome@Com Well said friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |