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Question: Poem -- idk what to call it :) opinions!?
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i'm sitting here,
the lense a cyclop eye
the whole world just
go ahead and pass me by
i don't mind
If this scene could hold
or just a second,
while i capture it,
that would be fantastic
the rain's so expressive
the colors, the depths,
the spirit and magic
does anyone see that
too, cause i always do
this world is always spinning
and you're always spinning past
but i don't mind
as long as you'll stop a bit
so i can catch a kiss
i don't mind
I swear everything's so right
like the breeze in the sky
and i'm slowly swinging
while the world just turns
the world's my mother
i must've been born
from the sky and dirt
i'd like to capture
everything on mother earthWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi, Helloronii,

I like this one -- Simply stated, straightforward, but with much to consider!. And thoughtfully positive, which I like very much!.

As for a name, how about just calling it "Sitting"!?

barjesse37Www@QuestionHome@Com

Photograph!?

I don't mind!?

Mother Earth!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

ShutterWww@QuestionHome@Com