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Question: Do you like my new Haiku poem!?
All song
Eternal soul
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"HI!"
I have many failed attempts at Haiku!. But traditionally a haiku has 5'7'5 syllables and also has to contain a season!. Here is the only successful Haiku I created, not the best but it is a Haiku

cold moist icy pole
climb ascending, puffy clouds,
Winter adventure

Here is a web link that will help you learn Haiku and other forms of poetry!.

http://www!.shadowpoetry!.com/resources/ha!.!.!.

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This is not a Haiku!.
A real Haiku has a 5/7/5 ryhme scheme yours has 2/4/2!.
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Haiki has a traditional syllable scheme (not a rhyme scheme as someone else wrote) of 5-7-5!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes its nice!.!.!.dont understand haiku so yeap cool!.!.!.

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cuz your wet
from the heat
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Haikus can be fun
But sometimes they are random
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