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reality in now hittin me hard
like a punch to the nose
but this is wat we chosed
i dont think we should be together anymore
i have cryied so much my lungs are now sore
i have tried to be the best i can
i have tried to be the best man
i used to thank god for sendin you to me
now i ask him!.!.why did he send you to me
for a long time i thought we were ment to be
how can this be
i gave you all my love
and yet you have told me that my love is not enough
i am trying so hard to be though
but s**t i am so confuse
sometimes i want us to put on our old shoes
and go back to the happy couple we used to be
but thinkin about it!.!.i dont want to go back to you
i will find someone new
someone not like you
but all the blame is on you!.!.
i kept you for so long cuz i loved you
but now u just keep trowing me down
its a good thing that this happend now
i gave so many chances to change
but ur not gonna change
thinking it good you dont deserve a man like me
you have lost a good thingWww@QuestionHome@Com

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