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Question: What Do You Think About These Lines!?
And the world’s got me dizzy again
You think after 22 years I’d be used to the spin
And it only feels worse when I stay in one place
So I’m always pacing around or walking away
I keep drinking the ink from my pen
And I’m balancing history books up on my head
But it all boils down to one quotable phrase
If you love something, give it away!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like lines 1, 2, 3, 7,8
line 4 just doesnt Flow
line 5 is just freaky!
line 6 has no deep meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com

Perhaps you should visit a Poison Control Center!. Drinking ink can have unpleasant results!.Www@QuestionHome@Com