Check out my poem and tell me what you think ;)?

Question: Check out my poem and tell me what you think ;)!?

you have a heart like thunder
and eyes of rain
you have hands like lightining that
wrap around my waist!.
you have a smile like heaven on a stormy dayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a nice message!.
But I would re arrange the wording a little so it doesn't sound like a song chorus!.
Unless it was meant to be a lymric of course!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dislike it (sorry) You certainly sound talented, but I just don't realate to the weather /body metaphor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unique, I like it! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is there more!?It's very descriptive!.!.!.nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your theme has been used!. Not very original, I must say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com