Here. A poem you will want to read?

Question: Here!. A poem you will want to read!?

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Pretty people packed tight in a circle;
Outsiders with longing looking in!.
Pry hard as you want; you're wasting your time-
Understand it's a game you can't win!.
Let it go; they tend to thrive off of us
And all the attention they receive!.
Remember- we are here for each other!.
I will follow if you try to leave!.
Though I make it on top, I'll pay it all back;
Yeah, I don't think I'll ever belong!.

acrostic!.
-swooshWww@QuestionHome@Com

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There are a couple of flaws too trivial for even a nitpicker as myself to mention!. I love the lissome lovely little lines of alliteration!. What impresses me most is the maturity evidenced in the expression of the feelings produced by a situation so typical of adolescence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Swoosh - this is great!. I hope our Poetry enclave isn't like that!. I know I was a briefly puzzled by the injokes, and personal references!.!.!.but, then I was quickly welcomed in!.
Of course, you belong!. You went on my contact list really early on!.!.!.!.I did chuck a lot of people off for a while as I became overloaded and wasn't getting to read newcomers, but I think most are back on again!.
Acrostics bring out the best in you!.
I like the line 'they tend to thrive off of us' - exactly, where would the exalted be if it wasn't for the acolytes!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Please forgive an old Poet but when you start a Poem with a rhythmic scheme,you should always follow through with that arrangement! As far as your Poem goes I believe it has character and definition,so keep up the good-work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats beautiful [=Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it, i guess it's about a person always trying to fit in and then realizes that they just have to be themselves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely stupendous!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awsome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

amazingXDWww@QuestionHome@Com

thats freaking awesome!. ;]Www@QuestionHome@Com

love it!.
definitely sends a message!.!.!. i like that kinda stuff!.

keep writing! :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I really like it!.!.!.!.its just so!.!.!.REAL!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's excellent!. best poem ive read on here out of the 20 ive read so far!. keep it up d u d e!!Www@QuestionHome@Com