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Perfect Bliss

What comes out of the ocean blue!?
Witch Contain Pieces of me and you!?
Is It shellfish of purple daze!?
that makes me stare and keeps me amaze!?
Or is it the sun that shines above the sea!?
witch shows refections of you and me!?
what ever it can be just take me away to a perfect bliss
where lovers treat they self to a sunflower kiss
make me dizzy twirl me around
havent you notice i wanna love you down!?
lover lets drive to an clean crisp world of fun
where runaway lovers come and secret lovers run
what ever it can be just take me away to a perfect bliss
where the world goes round and theres nothing we will missWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Really nice imagery!.
It gives a almost 'sea sick', butterflies in the stomach feeling (a good feel)!.

My favorite line
"where runaway lovers come and secret lovers run"

Maybe, just 'Bliss' would be an apt title!.!.!.

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