Opinions please for a short poem I wrote!!?

Question: Opinions please for a short poem I wrote!!!?

Please try very hard not to believe me
This writing simply is to be
The epitaph of our epitome
and request to please not forget me!.

I would step out of a reflection,
no intention or direction,
joy invading like infection,
no control of our defection,
please no waiting, waiting:
just abandon your recollection!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I found it pretty cool!. Very intellectual!. My favorite part is the contradiction of joy and infection! Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it screams "I'm really fake"

don't believe what i say
i don't say what i mean
that this is the stereotypical end
and i'm asking you to not forget me

I look at myself
I don't know where to go or what do
I'm like depressed
cuz we can't control what we give up
so don't wait
just fo-get 'bout it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

u must hate ur self

but u get five stars

a real poet hates they self some where along the lineWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but it isn't something verry good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it
sounds like u need to go preach it in a coffee house somewhere
=)Www@QuestionHome@Com